Sunday, November 08, 2009

Tree of Life
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In the vision of my eyes,
I see the world in a disguise
playing with the human emotion
like a child without a notion.

I scan the open field of dreams
everything clearer than it seems.
Wandering round in an enlightened state,
hoping my words don’t come to late.

Can you feel the life of you
within the world of confusion too?
Upon the doorway of mystical bliss
there is a lot I feel I miss.

The trees they prosper with each season,
some are wounded with good reason.
Getting stronger from each storm
within each branch about to form.

Life it takes us for a spin;
seasons strengthen us to win.
This world is one we all must commune
lets play our lives in an angelic tune.

Sin will compromise our feat
sacrifice our only mete.
When we serve the One who is True,
the tree of life will flow through you.

3 comments:

Stormcrow said...

Well put.

Raven said...

Yes,

I really like how you started this. Love the image of the trees, something most of us are familiar with, if only on a superficial level.

beautiful.

Ravenne

joni said...

Thanks Raven!
After writing a poem and before posting I think, "What will Raven think?" Yup, you're in my thoughts because I know if they can touch you on ANY level, then I've done my job. :-)
Thanks so much for reading and visiting!

Joni