tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13925627.post1062196841270396887..comments2023-12-15T23:36:01.113-06:00Comments on Joni's Muse ~ The Poet Within: Poetry Sundayjonihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03401569094090026684noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13925627.post-14002317712889757642008-09-30T09:51:00.000-05:002008-09-30T09:51:00.000-05:00OOOOhhhhh,This is very nice. You've captured the f...OOOOhhhhh,<BR/><BR/>This is very nice. You've captured the feel of the storm in a very beautiful way. I especially like, "Floating weightless withoug a sound. Lightning bolts seize the ground."<BR/><BR/>Nice visuals.<BR/><BR/>RavenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com